cautiously, at midnight I went to an abandon forest to explore stuff , as I stared walking i saw this man just standing there looking at something, he had turn around this time started to panicked and i shake really hard. And then i started to run as fast as i could then got inside my car drived speedily fast .
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Hello Phoenix, I am Ivan from Room 23. I really like this writing because you made little words into big and exciting words. What I think you should do is describe the man more make this story a bit longer because I think it would be more exciting an creepier. Thank you for sharing your writing, it was very good. Maybe you should check out my blog https://odsziw.blogspot.com/
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thank you so much for commenting on my blog and thanks for the amzaing idea.
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